Dear jasmin,
I hope that my letter find you in good cheap, first, I want thank you so much for your invitation, it is so nice from you to think of me, I am so sorry to tell you that I can’t visit you this vacation, because I have to finish my summer courses, besides I already took all my days off from work thus, I can’t ask my boss more.
Dear friend, I really miss you so much and I can’t wait to see you, see aunt Fatima and taste her delicious plates, also enjoy Moroccan monuments and landscaping.
I promise that next vacation I try my best to come, anyway, take care of you and keep in touch with me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, first, really, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 506.0 937.175257732 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 122.0 206.0 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14754098361 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3202947667 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 127.690721649 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 155.7 290.88556701 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 16.3608247423 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.66560509 44.8134815571 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.666666667 76.5299724578 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.6666666667 16.8248392259 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 4.34317383033 353% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249910275396 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152394656494 0.0766984524023 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333519076401 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153169720165 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034388247465 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 8.37731958763 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.26 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 7.68 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 41.2886597938 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 8.62886597938 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 8.54432989691 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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