Dear Butter,
I’m delighted to receive your letter. It’s great to hear that your are adjusting well in your new life in Sydney and I can vividly imagine how lovely the harbour city from the stories you shared. It was such a sweet thought of you for inviting me to experience the city and offering your place for me to stay.
I would love to go to Australia in December for a vacation but I regret to say that I won’t have much time to spare because of prior work and family commitments. I will be flying to Japan for a business trip on the first week of the month. When I come back, my family and I will be visiting our relatives in the provinces during the Christmas holidays.
How about if I come on February or April next year? I think summer would be a perfect season to enjoy the warm weather and bask in the beaches of Bondi. Fall would also be an equally great season and enjoy the autumnal colors of foliage.
Let me know your thoughts. I’m looking forward to spending time with you and excited to start booking my flights soon.
Love,
Fly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45226130653 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32828772149 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628140703518 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9192376776 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213096530683 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691142611985 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679080446761 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117882894655 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104002703204 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.