Dear Mark,
I am delighted to receive your letter after so long time. I always cherish our time together and often think about them. Hope you are doing well by grace of almighty. Franky, I am glad about your decision to take job in Canada. In this manner atleast, we can spend some time together. Any way, after receiving you letter immediately, I started to search some jobs for you as per you request and infact have some surprising news to share with you.
Recently, I have come across a job posting in a travel company and contacted advertiser to gather more information. Reiterating work details, the opportunity is posted by Southern Tours and travels company and vacancy is for tour guide. Is n't it exciting. Though corporate office is in Toranto you need to visit many cities as part of your job. Your responsibilities include, to act as instructor to the tourists and assist costumer's in travelling. Further, you need to visit different locations alongwith designated clients as part of your work arena. In addition, as you already fluent in French and English you need to give audio announcements in both languages.
Luckily, you have many straits which perfectly fits the posted opportunity. This particular job matches to your profile very much common to the kind of job you are searching for. I know, you love travelling and speaking to other people which all are prime qualities required for this post. Finally, your bilingual talent is going to earn you sufficient money. In my opinion, you cannot get any other better job than this. Similarly, I can see your shining career in this employment. Your communication skills, loquacious nature are going to be asset for you.
Alongwith this letter, I have attached job application form. You can apply online aswell and website address is 'southerntips.com' where there is note about how to fulfill applications. Hence, I recommend you to go through the posting for yourself and having, if any, queries you can contact Human Resources manager for clarification. Also, please don't forget to keep all your documents and 2 passport size photos before applying.
Please take care and look forward to meet you.
Yours friendly,
Joyce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tor to the tourists and assist costumers in travelling. Further, you need to vis...
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Line 9, column 347, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...manager for clarification. Also, please dont forget to keep all your documents and 2...
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Line 9, column 430, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...2 passport size photos before applying. Please take care and look forward to mee...
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Line 11, column 35, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
... Please take care and look forward to meet you. Yours friendly, Joyce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, look, similarly, so, well, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 937.175257732 197% => OK
No of words: 367.0 206.0 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0272479564 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 3.78020617076 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75666647094 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 127.690721649 179% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621253405995 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 290.88556701 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.13402061856 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 12.6804123711 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.813046762 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9615384615 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1153846154 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489238332498 0.216113520407 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130455471394 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824679203467 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274083857737 0.12726935374 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866168860157 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 41.2886597938 240% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.