Hey Shivangi
How you doing. Well, I was just checking the employment newsletter & found out a job opening for the position of Sales Executive in a pharma company known as Eris Healthcare. The job involves meeting the Cardiologist doctors for promotion of the newly launched range of medicines & also ensuring sales to the pharmacy stores adjoined to the hospitals. The job opening is for freshers who want to pursue their career in pharma industry.
The job role is quiet challenging & would provide lot of scope for marketing skills development. As you had pursued your MBA in marketing as a specialization, I thought this would be a great job opportunity for you to consider for your career. The company is well established & known to provide wonderful work environment to the freshers.
Well incase if it sounds interesting for you, you can apply directly on their website under current job openings. I am also sharing the web link of the company's website for your ease. Do let me know if you need any further help from my end. Hope to hear you soon on this
Regards,
Vishal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sue their career in pharma industry. The job role is quiet challenging & would p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8972972973 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78372253774 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7363257653 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370959087499 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132585052265 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775002973535 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258261602286 0.12726935374 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433553042807 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.