Dear Smith,
Hope this letter finds you well. I was thrilled to hear that you wanted to work in my conutry in the last letter. Actually, I just have a recommendation for you where I did internship after our graduation.
The company, named as "XXX", is a fast developing enterprise focusing on cloud computing. Many of local IT companies are its clients for the superior service in data analysis especially Saas service. I really wished to work as a data scientist in this company while I did not pass the final interview then. However, with your foreign company internship experience and our data science background, I think you are quite suitable for the jobs there. Besides, there are many colleagues graduated from NYU and OSU, you may find it's quite easy to get involved.
Certainly you can search the company for more information first, the official website: www.XXX.com. If you want to apply this job, I will contact my ex-workmate there to give you reference number, meanwhile, you need to register to apply online.
Hope we can meet in this city, I look forward to hearing from you soon.
SIncerely,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
... company for more information first, the official website: www.XXX.com. If you wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, however, if, look, may, really, so, then, well, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96858638743 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82833020869 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670157068063 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6586529199 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2727272727 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327327938657 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107234301331 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718663366825 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188620991744 0.12726935374 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656291805362 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.