Dear Tom,
I''m sorry to you when I saw your letter about the noise in my flat this morning. I''m witring to appologize to you and your family with this issue.
I began to redecorate my living room last month. I needed to fix water leaking creavets on my walls and roofs. The work was quite loud and disturbing since the sound of drilling with tools. I feel so sorry with that, especially after knowing that you have a little kid during the noise, too. You are so cultivated while I am so rude since I should tell you about the work ahead of time in person. The work will be finished tomorrow, I promise there is no annoying sound then.
I''m truely asking for your forgiveness. Also I would like to invite you and your family to my flat for dinner next week.
I''m eagerly waiting for your reply.
Yours faithfuly,
Tony
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43790849673 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20355481174 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653594771242 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6915463831 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.5833333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.75 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282527040878 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110461741616 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854204732144 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189048681486 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711787949006 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.58 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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