Dear Tom,
I received your letter two days ago and I am glad that you want to find a job in India. Yesterday I discussed this with one of my friends working at Concentrix, a large multinational company in Gurgaon, and he told me that they wanted to hire someone who could be responsible for taking personal interviews for hiring practioner at various process in their office.
As your major at college is in Human Resource, I believe that this job suits your profile perfectly. I remember you told me earlier that you have a working experience as an interviewer at ‘Harry’s tailor’ so this will help you here.
I talked to HR department and they agreed to take your interview via skype but firstly you would have to fill up a form which I have sent you on your mail along with your CV revert it back to company’s HR mail, i.e; Reema.singh@concentrix.com as soon as possible.
All the best for your interview. Hope to meet you soon.
Your sincerely,
BP singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77456647399 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29176414452 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682080924855 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.1755393798 44.8134815571 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 103.25 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388764120792 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167444737333 0.0766984524023 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048940022853 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235590341849 0.12726935374 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178819963879 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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