How are things with you? I hope that you and your family doing well? I’m writing with regard to your request about working in my home country. I’ve been looking for a job for you since you mentioned to me and fortunately, I've found an opening job in a company called Honda in the Supply Chain Management department.
Let me explain why this job may suit you in many aspects. Because you have good English proficiency and as the job requires good English knowledge, you will be able to work in this company. Your work responsibility, as I know, will be to be keeping in touch with the supplier, which may be not only an occupation but also joyful for you. As far as I remember your desire, you are also allowed to work home-office, you can manage your work as you wish.
But there are things to do you are obligated to apply online form the website that is given below. Once you pass the first stage, they will invite you to have an interview in the Human Resources department in the company. I am looking forward to seeing you in my country. Take care. See you soon.
Best Regards
Erman DURAN
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ce you mentioned to me and fortunately, Ive found an opening job in a company calle...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, may, so, well, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49753694581 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43881670714 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591133004926 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9645188998 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2307692308 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430212709709 0.216113520407 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151669240762 0.0766984524023 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779634020802 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309286106213 0.12726935374 243% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634261477941 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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