Dear John,
I hope this letter of mine find you and your family in ravishing health. The purpose of writing this letter is to provide you with information about a job opening in India which could be perfect for you, that you asked in your last letter.
I got the profile information from an Indian online job portal "Naukri.com". It is an opening for the "DevOps Software Engineer" in Accenture, it is a local company. You need to be involved in the automation part for continuous integration and delivery for the project. I think this opportunity is suitable for you, as you are already up to date and indulged with job-related skills like Ansible, Jenkins, AWS, and Python. You can directly apply for this job on the website with your updated resume, the job ID is "CA12345". It may be a possibility that the organization would ask you for face to face round, for that you are always welcome in India do not worry about anything.
Write me back about your plan regarding this particular opportunity or in case you need further assistance.
Your Faithfully,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'regard'
Suggestion: regard
Dear Kenny, I am writing you regards to inform a job opening in my company a...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... you are expecting a job here in Japan. Its a practice software engineer role accor...
^^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...re thus, it would be a dream come true. However your education from Japan always be a a...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...true. However your education from Japan always be a additional qualification for you. Jap...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ver your education from Japan always be a additional qualification for you. Japan...
^
Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...sition you need to post your profile on companies portal or i will share direct our Human...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ost your profile on companies portal or i will share direct our Human Resource Ma...
^
Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ager of our company. Further, certainly i will speak to her about you. Wishin...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82162162162 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83171024422 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9536250192 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405390399764 0.216113520407 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139188015056 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086721246235 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2487287971 0.12726935374 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598083644771 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.