A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear John,
It was a pleasant surprise to hear from you after such a long time and my joy knew no bounds when I saw your invite to your home for Christmas. I'll definitely make it and would need to know a few details to plan my trip as this is the first time I am visiting Canada.
I just want to surprise your dad and mom with a memorable gift that they would cherish. I remember that your mom is just amazing at making cakes and confectionaries and your dad is so interested in reading books. Things would have changed in the last year. So, I need your input regarding this.
Winter can be so hard for outsiders in Canada. If you can tell me something about the clothing that I should bring, I can plan my stuff accordingly. Also, give me some hints on Christmas activities like church visits and prayer meetings to plan my clothing to match the occasion.
As you know, I'm always fond of exploring foods. I would like to make use of this trip to taste different cuisines made during the Christmas festival.
Waiting eagerly for your response!
Take care
Anand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...your invite to your home for Christmas. Ill definitely make it and would need to kn...
^^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... to match the occasion. As you know, Im always fond of exploring foods. I would...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, if, regarding, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4923857868 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43849330146 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639593908629 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3095796919 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.75 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17793263724 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643687676761 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370123618246 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938614619365 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024819197959 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.