Dear Amber,
It’s been a while since we last met, hoping you are doing well and enjoying the holiday season. It was indeed so amazing that I met such a wonderful person like you last year. Thank you for asking me to come and visit your home country.
I have already made all sorts of arrangements to visit you this November, but I haven’t been to your country before, I would like to have some information from your part if possible. In addition, could you also advance what kind of gift is traditionally preferred or like in your country so that I can buy the gifts for your family.
Meanwhile, can you suggest what sorts of clothes should I carry because I am not sure about the temperature difference between day and night. I am also interested in what kind of activities or even will be held in November and is there any local food that must be tried.
Can’t wait to meet you. Stay fine and take care.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
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- On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter 1 Describe the item you lost 2 Explain how you lost it 3 Tell the
- The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in cities attempts must be mad 73
- You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel when you will be arriving and leavingwhat type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will costinquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel 73
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52601156069 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37161931353 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687861271676 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4404184688 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355789768348 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12558569674 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920558246522 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192916707293 0.12726935374 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106827896701 0.0580467560999 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.