Dear Alex,
First of all, I would like to thank you so much for your invitation to visit Sydney. I am really excited to make this happen this time. It has been long one year we met last time in Malaysia and eager to tell you a lot of new things when we meet.
You mentioned once that your family is a great admirer of Indian culture and handicrafts; especially your brother, who loved wooden chess game set he got from India last time. This time I am planning to get some gifts for your parents and younger brother. I know David and am aware of his choice. But I never met your parents, so I have some ambiguity over picking the right gift for them. I would be grateful if you can advise me to choose the right present.
As you are aware this is the first time I am visiting Australia, I am very exhilarated. You know, I have long pending wish to do scuba and I wish I can do in this trip. However, you may suggest any other famous activities there which attract adventure lover tourist like me. Also, mention what kind of clothes and gears I should carry for this tour.
You will be surprised to know that I have joined Peta movement and now I am following a strict vegan lifestyle and I hope I won't find difficulties in finding suitable food for me. In case you fee otherwise, please let me know in advance so I carry some arrangement for myself during my tour.
Once again Thanks. Can't wait to meet you.
Yours,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rangement for myself during my tour. Once again Thanks. Cant wait to meet you. ...
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Line 11, column 20, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...f during my tour. Once again Thanks. Cant wait to meet you. Yours, ABC
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, kind of, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30996309963 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27255948807 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2486135582 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 4.34317383033 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292183145569 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08978947987 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612241327858 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164787494047 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504868400257 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.