Hey Rakesh,
I hope you doing good and thanks for reaching out to me for suggestions. I wish I could have responded sooner but I have been busy with my new housewarming formalities. Anyway here are my two cents on where you can go for a perfect vacation. I strongly suggest you to go to New Zealand especially southern island of the country. I was there last year and I have had one of the best road journeys ever in my life. The journey from Christchurch to Queenstown has breathtaking views and of the most scenic road.
Sara and I landed in Christchurch airport and rented a car from local renting companies. Our final destination on this trips is Queenstown. It took 2 nights for us to reach there and in between we have experienced few alpines and snowfall
Queenstown has an alias name “Adventures capital of world” and believe me it won’t disappoint. There are loads of things one can experience starting from bungee jumping to sky diving. If we would like to have nice and calm vacation, you can relax beside the lake and you could also go for cruise trip. Coffee in the cruise is on the best :)
In terms of food, there are plenty of restaurants which can offer wide range of dishes from each and every corner of the world. We can have English breakfast, French breads for and Indian roti as well.
I had a great time when was last time, I hope you will have once in a lifetime experience if at all you visit. Keep me posted with updates.
Warm Regards,
Sudheerkumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 115, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ing companies. Our final destination on this trips is Queenstown. It took 2 nights f...
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Line 6, column 188, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...erience starting from bungee jumping to sky diving. If we would like to have nice and calm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58888888889 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70819045803 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3360744767 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4375 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 4.34317383033 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248875368483 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073746947359 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897158778562 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125108305117 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768335300812 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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