A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend
a
destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you
have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do
there and what the food was like. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sarah,
Thanks for your letter. I m glad you and the family are well. So, you‛re thinking of
going on holiday in the UK. Well I can certainly recommend one destination for you. I
went one year to a place called Lochinver in the north west of Scotland. It s quite a
long trip to get there as it s only about thirty miles from the north coast but it s
worth it. There are only a few places to stay. There are two hotels, the Kirkaig and the Assynt in
the centre of town, and a campsite just outside town. We stayed at the Kirkaig Hotel but I
know you and your family are keen campers so you might prefer the camping option.
There is a lot to do but it s a bit dependent on the weather. There s a beautiful beach, a
golf course, the fishing is excellent and there are fantastic hills nearby for walking
in amazing scenery. If it s wet there s a small cinema in town but that s about all. Take
some board games!
The food is typical British in the hotels but some of the Scottish specialities are
fantastic. If you‛re camping though, food will be up to you!
Anyway, I ve got to go out now and pick up the kids. Write again if you need any more
information.
Regards, Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mily are well. So, you‛re thinking of going on holiday in the UK. Well I can certai...
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... recommend one destination for you. I went one year to a place called Lochinver in...
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Suggestion: Worth
...y miles from the north coast but it s worth it. There are only a few places to stay...
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Suggestion: The
...hotels, the Kirkaig and the Assynt in the centre of town, and a campsite just out...
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Suggestion: Know
... We stayed at the Kirkaig Hotel but I know you and your family are keen campers so...
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...re fantastic hills nearby for walking in amazing scenery. If it s wet there s a ...
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Suggestion: Some
...ma in town but that s about all. Take some board games! The food is typical Brit...
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Suggestion: Information
...ids. Write again if you need any more information. Regards, Mary
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26724137931 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28672628937 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9879625689 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4666666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.29896907216 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289541119509 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834837124866 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085319577619 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914007227272 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108268382426 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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