Dear ken,
Hope you are doing well, I am writing this letter in regards with mentioning few holiday destinations which was adorable with surrounding of nature all around. As there are plenty of places to visit in different countries but several sites are fabulous in their own way of beauty.
In my opinion, Maldives is the mind-blowing site to explore, It is an island surrounded by ocean and which has abundant of scenic views. All the people from globe comes over there in their vacations to spend relaxing and beautiful time with nature. Furthermore, I went there with my family couple of years ago and we stayed in a resort called 'blue valley' which was reasonable in prices and it was providing us breakfast and it also had a swimming pool. However, you can do their some water sport, shopping, sight seeing etc. Their famous food was sea food whoever loves to enjoy they must try it.
I would recommend you to must visit that beautiful place, You and your family will enjoy a lot there. Have a great time.
Lots of love,
Casandra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ver loves to enjoy they must try it. I would recommend you to must visit that...
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...y a lot there. Have a great time. Lots of love, Casandra ...
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... a great time. Lots of love, Casandra
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77173913043 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41803244548 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701086956522 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9459392758 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196868025274 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718767930524 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10460451057 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132448828761 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125415406114 0.0580467560999 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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