A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination.
Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to provide you some suggestions about a best place for a holiday. I would recommend a Phuket Place, which is situated in a Thailand country. I visited there one year ago with my nuclear family.
I hope you heard about that place, where available gorgeous beaches are are present such as patong, kata and karon. If you are like to go mountain, also Buddha statue available. You can hire the taxi or bike over there to quickest reach every place. I stayed at galaxy hotel for 5 days and the hotel fees reasonable including food, service is quite good. I would suggest you that hotel to book in advance. Beside, Phi phi island is also beautiful so you can pick the speed boat then you can reach island to stay 1 night and enjoy your holiday.
On the whole, My experience was awesome in Phuket and I hope you will enjoy very soon.
Best Wishes,
Samit Bhavsar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...r to provide you some suggestions about a best place for a holiday. I would recom...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hich is situated in a Thailand country. I visited there one year ago with my nucl...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... one year ago with my nuclear family. I hope you heard about that place, where ...
^
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
...place, where available gorgeous beaches are are present such as patong, kata and karon....
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the quickest'.
Suggestion: to the quickest
...ou can hire the taxi or bike over there to quickest reach every place. I stayed at galaxy h...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Phi
...that hotel to book in advance. Beside, Phi phi island is also beautiful so you can pic...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n pick the speed boat then you can reach island to stay 1 night and enjoy your ho...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5243902439 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23580192146 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0361026777 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4545454545 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383663603636 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122079176319 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746241215994 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223498388465 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863987594734 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.