Nowadays, the majority of people tend to visit large shopping centres and malls to do their shopping because of there are several options are available rather than the local shops. I certainly agree that the trend of shopping malls is a quite positive development of nation and side effects of local shops. This essay will discuss about large shopping malls of benefits and the drawbacks of this trend also.
To begin with shopping malls, People obtain less consuming time and transportation cost. In large shopping mall, several kind of products are available like clothes, foods and beverages, groceries, children toy’s and so on. Even, the competitor’s product are also available to compare the price and quality. In malls, People feel comfortable, safe and wider space to gives them pleasure. The Payment method options are numerous through cash, scan code, credit and debit card. In festival season, the malls give certain amount of discounts too in cheaper price. Nowadays, the cinema theatre is also available to watch the movie with family. Finally yet importantly, since you can find almost everything on your shopping list at large department malls.
Seeing the present circumstances, many local shops are closed due to people denied to visit there. It may have adverse effect on local shopkeepers like lack of fund to support their family, Affect to their children education and basic requirements on daily basis. Sometimes it leads to violence and crime due to lack of fund. For example, in western countries, People wanted to buy the products in largest shopping malls Because of mall facility is available everywhere.
To sum up, The shopping malls is not a bad idea to purchase the items because of the benefits are numerous and price is also reasonable, while People should buy some products from local shops also to maintain the balance between large malls and small local shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 403, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...enefits and the drawbacks of this trend also. To begin with shopping malls, Peopl...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...portation cost. In large shopping mall, several kind of products are available like clothes,...
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Line 3, column 652, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ilable to watch the movie with family. Finally yet importantly, since you can find alm...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied visiting'.
Suggestion: denied visiting
...ny local shops are closed due to people denied to visit there. It may have adverse effect on lo...
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Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the largest'.
Suggestion: in the largest
...ries, People wanted to buy the products in largest shopping malls Because of mall facility...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, may, so, while, for example, kind of, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 26.3917525773 189% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 937.175257732 171% => OK
No of words: 311.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16720257235 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58573685641 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 290.88556701 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5138869409 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338435794647 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101313310379 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908348750418 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223849931664 0.12726935374 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935903682606 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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