In today’s world, some people tend to believe that it is only developed countries huge responsibility to protect the environment for climate change, while others do not agree and suggest that all countries are equal responsibilities to preserve the environment, Not only first counties responsibility. This essay will discuss about protect and preserve environment equally despite some potential view’s.
On the one hand, some people think that the first countries should take initiative to protecting the environment like United Nations, Europeans countries, Australia, New Zealand and so on because these countries are well developed. The governments are competent to provide the basic amenities to public and need to have enhance improved to reduce the emissions by decreasing the carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide. The trees should cutting less. Most of the vehicle transformed from gasoline to electrical, which can reduce the pollution. They have had all kind of facilities to improve the environment further more.
On the other side, all are equally responsible to protect the environment on earth. Even, each citizens has moral responsibility to think how to further endeavor improve on earth by minimum waste. All people should avoid using plastic bags, which is damage the environment and spread toxic. People should minimum cut down the tress and get oxygen more. The waste materials could not dumped into sea and rivers. It is damaged marine environment.
In my view, each citizen has unique responsibility to preserve environment by using effective ideas. It can help us to live in clean and fresh environment. The governments should be decided to teach in colleges and schools since childhood about environment so that People can get awareness and think before damage the environment.
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- You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success.Writ 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'counties'' or 'county's'?
Suggestion: counties'; county's
...reserve the environment, Not only first counties responsibility. This essay will discuss...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enhanced'.
Suggestion: enhanced
...ic amenities to public and need to have enhance improved to reduce the emissions by dec...
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Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'dump'
Suggestion: dump
...gen more. The waste materials could not dumped into sea and rivers. It is damaged mari...
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Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd think before damage the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, while, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48042704626 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97372646694 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 73.10221333 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34334703573 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898938455727 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799986948355 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192482746114 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069504599792 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.