A friend of yours is living in another country. You would like to work in his/her country for a while. Write a letter to your friend and say
– Explain why you would like to work in his/her country
– Describe your skills
– Ask for some information about working in his/her country
Dear Emma,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I am looking for a new job and decide to work in your home country for a temporary time.
Firstly, I need to improve my career to increase salary. It would be one of the good opportunities to increase my wage because my potential company needs an employee who has foreign experiences. This is the reason why I have to work in your nation.
I should also explain my practical skills that is useful to have new job there as sales representitives. To be honest, I am really good at speaking such as demonstrating others to understand and persuade because I am confident to talk and my personality is extroverted that means I never feel awkard to tell.
I wonder that there is any stores that sell some goods in terms of my work. I sometimes need to wear comfortable shoes because when I work long time, my feet are sored and hurt. Moreover, some overseas companies may request some proper clothes as a uniform, so I would like to purchase to familiarize the new and different culture of work atmosphere.
I hope that you will reply my letter because your answers are going to be very helpful as advice.
Best regards,
Didoeoco
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are any stores'?
Suggestion: there are any stores
...r feel awkard to tell. I wonder that there is any stores that sell some goods in terms of my wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, as for, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59069767442 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72589092615 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0123952169 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7272727273 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 4.34317383033 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228486918412 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827154986351 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082848806431 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130478762254 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847109623406 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.