Dear Marie,
I hope you are doing splendidly well. I am writing with regard to explain the TEFL course I did at Loyal university.
First and foremost, It is vital that you are in love with what you are studying. So please do not underestimate the sense of commitment to your major the more you love what you study the more chance you would have to be successful at university. I always adore my major TEFL which stands for teaching English as a foreign language. Put aside my immense interest in the language English and the job of teachers, I find this major highly practical. If you become a TEFL graduate be certain, there are a host of job opportunities waiting for you all around the world. unquestionably, this major will guarantee a future job for you. It is also worthy to mention that you could also start teaching English while you are a university student.
About the university, If I were you, I would not waste a second to apply for this high-ranked university. Academically talking, the professors are the cream of the crop with the latest teaching methods. To add on, they are extremely knowledgeable and supportive. Therefore, be sure you are not going to meet lazy, absent-minded lecturers. Putting a light on the university's facilities I can proudly say I have studied in classes with second to none, updated amenities. Along with all positive features, you are going to experience a relaxed friendly atmosphere with helpful university's staffs who are always accessible at anytime you wish either online or offline.
My friend Marie I am mercifully delighted about your decision and I hope I can mention some points which can ease your applying process. The first and easy step is just to visit the university's website and make sure you meet all the requirements they require for this major. The next step is checking tuition fees and please be aware that you should add accommodation costs to your educational expenditures as well as the other costs you may confront with. I want you before applying to this university have a clear idea of all your probable expenditures. After that, you could send a request letter to Jane saryn and she would update you with further information and this can facilitate your application form process.
I am truly eager to cover any questions you may have related to this issue.
Best Regards,
Hiva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 32.9175257732 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 937.175257732 210% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 405.0 206.0 197% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85925925926 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 3.78020617076 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.799982581 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 127.690721649 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 290.88556701 217% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3022483336 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4545454545 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 7.41237113402 256% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339548756368 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930922493762 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644869562489 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177413102231 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086482031954 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 41.2886597938 223% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.