A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He asked for your advice about studying this subject.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1.) Give details of the course.
2.) Explain why you recommend the university.
3.) Give some advice about applying.
Dear Jordan,
I hope you are doing great and thank you for believing in me to give you a liable advice about your further course in the university from where I pursued. I suggest you to study hard for this subject as it is not as easy as it looks like.
Firstly, for me this was the toughest subject till now. I worked my ass off for this subject the whole semester but still, got 75 percent. I would strongly recommend you to ignore this course if you are considering yourself a non-scholar. Perhaps, if you choose this subject, it would be very much necessary for you to take this course seriously from the prelude.
Secondly, the professors are good in knowledge and helpful. However, there would not be any difficulty in doubts. Moreover, university surroundings and atmosphere are also nice. Howbeit, I specially suggest you to attend all the labs for this subject as it will give you in-depth knowledge. Similarly, make short notes of every lectures.
All in all, every success can be achieved if we struggle for it. Therefore, work hard and I definitely know that you can pass out this subject on an ease. Let me know if you have further concerns and keep me posted about your career progress.
Your lovingly,
SM
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'liable advice'.
Suggestion: liable advice
...ank you for believing in me to give you a liable advice about your further course in the univer...
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Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly, make short notes of every lectures. All in all, every success can be achieve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68202764977 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56178924338 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599078341014 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3311949038 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359678330771 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112669543309 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897646427273 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22069803515 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976297890586 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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