Dear Sam,
How are you doing? I am very happy by seeing the letter from you. I am writing this letter to answer your questions regarding the holiday camping and want to share my experiences as well.
For sure you will have fun in the Camping holiday, try to attend of no other important activity. As we will get a chance to spend time with friends and teachers and we will learn new things in this holiday trip.
This campaign holidays have many pros but there are some cons as well such as we need to face food starvation, leg pain and no proper facilities for sleeping. We need to be stronger to achieve all the problems to enjoy the trip.
I love to go to campaigns as well, initially I was so scary and not prefer to go but now a days I like to go and had fun with Friends. Why not we go together to campaign in coming summer holidays? as I will get more then 3 weeks we can plan for a 2 weeks campaign trip to UK mountains near to Nelida state.
Miss you so much, hope we will meet in summer.
Waiting for your reply.
Best Wishes,
Mani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, How are you doing? I am very happy by se...
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Line 10, column 86, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...I was so scary and not prefer to go but now a days I like to go and had fun with Friends. ...
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Line 10, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...s so scary and not prefer to go but now a days I like to go and had fun with Friends. ...
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Line 10, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
... to campaign in coming summer holidays? as I will get more then 3 weeks we can pla...
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Line 10, column 217, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ing summer holidays? as I will get more then 3 weeks we can plan for a 2 weeks campa...
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Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Waiting for your reply. Best Wishes, Mani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23039215686 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22276221332 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8449392544 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3846153846 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247927654463 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867569774077 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805765087392 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137180191869 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870062426343 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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