More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, others think this will bring stress to the home. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Now a day’s people are preferring to work from home by using the latest technology. While some people think it will be an advantage for them and their family, but whereas, some people think it will impact the entire family and personnel life. Thus, both the sides have advantages and disadvantages but according to office work should complete at the office.
On one hand, the advantages of people working from home can save their time to get ready, energy, spending money on traveling. In addition to these, they can do some personnel works such as bring vegetables from the market, drop kids at school, helping parents by accompanying them to go to hospitals for weekly or monthly checkups. Similarly, they can do some small business or can join with some other friends who are in a business which will help them to increase their income. Moreover, they can schedule the work when to work and when to take rest, these things can help them giving out better performance on their task.
On the other hand, the disadvantages of people working from home will get disturbances in terms of technology and resources such as frequent internet problems, don’t have a fixed place to work, frequent electricity problems. The support from family members may decrease day by day the working place can be messy and people around them can make noises, kids were playing near the workplace. The person unable to concentrate in meetings and become lazy to complete the work on time as always want to take rest then working.
In conclusion, working from home should be encouraged because of the advantages overcome the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
Now a day’s people are preferring to work from home by using the latest t...
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Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to give' or 'give'.
Suggestion: to give; give
...o take rest, these things can help them giving out better performance on their task. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, thus, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94890510949 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59950363504 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.594431531 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249005071269 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101893638428 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058572512833 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159238829281 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744789182067 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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