You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am Mani and I am new residents to the ATR Apartments, Jakarta. I am writing this letter to inquiry about the availability of electrical goods which are required for me in the branch which is near to this apartment.
As I got job offer in Jakarta so, I hire double bed room in the ATR service apartment. I need Washing machine- 20 kg and refrigerator with double door in addition want to purchase TV Samsung 40 inches. I hope these electronic goods are available in your shop. Please let me know the price details, delivery time as well as method of payment mode.
I have a plan to drop down in a week following this week end, it’s around 25 Dec 2020.I would also humble request you to inform me the duration till the time you will be able to retain all the electronic equipment for me
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convince.
Yours faithfully,
Lina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir / Madam, I am Mani and I am new residents to the ...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'refrigerator' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'refrigerators'.
Suggestion: refrigerators
...ment. I need Washing machine- 20 kg and refrigerator with double door in addition want to pu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... this week end, it’s around 25 Dec 2020.I would also humble request you to inform...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tain all the electronic equipment for me I look forward to hearing from you at yo...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l the electronic equipment for me I look forward to hearing from you at you...
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Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... earliest convince. Yours faithfully, Lina
^^^
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st convince. Yours faithfully, Lina
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58181818182 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56048900287 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8332875458 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156952187301 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485797489854 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579605590238 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084756512453 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036552672148 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.