We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think it will change in the future?
Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?
According to me these modern days computer based technology is very important. Every one habituated to use the personal laptops in daily life activities. All the human beings are totally dependent and learning all the new applications, new technologies which are helping them in day to day activities.
On one hand all individuals relay in computers firstly , because of the covid-19 situation there is a need to use laptops in terms attending classes , working from home, need to submit assignments by using the google class room. Secondly , in future the usage of computers will be elaborate in all the human interactive places as well , such as labour work , rescue operations and even like space related research activities.
On the other hand the fact that computers help us, they make us dependent. It is reducing the people interactions , impact on their social life. As, We live in a technological era, the usage of computers is everywhere with all benefits they provide and all dangers they hide. However we are satisfied with them and sometimes we even thank them because they help us in communicating, studying, doing business, entertaining and saving lives in critical situations.
According to me it’s totally dependent on each individual person decision to balance the life between laptop and personal life. People need to understand and use the computers for their benefits can be more appreciable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...they provide and all dangers they hide. However we are satisfied with them and sometime...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...saving lives in critical situations. According to me it’s totally dependent on each individu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92400457615 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609649122807 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5407468219 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.818181818 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190062601982 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727209087834 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515178223487 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107060453497 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280293298254 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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