Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive gift Write a letter to your friend In your letter thank your friend explain how useful the gift is arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

Dear Kishan,

I hope you and your family are all doing well. Thank you so much for the refrigerator! But you shouldn't have bought such an expensive gift.

The timing couldn't have been any more perfect for this gift. My refrigerator was almost a decade old, and ever since the last repair, it had not been working really well. I was planning to buy a new one this year during the Christmas sale, but I think you read my mind.

The best thing about the new refrigerator is the automatic temperature feature. It automatically adjusts the temperature with the changing seasons, and the chills a six-pack of beer in a matter of minutes. Talking of beer, it reminds me that it been a long time since we pulled an all-nighter playing Fifa! Let's do it over this weekend if you are free? Pizzas and beer are on me.

Thanks again for this amazing gift! Hoping to see you soon.

Warm wishes,

Hamza

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...u so much for the refrigerator! But you shouldnt have bought such an expensive gift. ...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...t such an expensive gift. The timing couldnt have been any more perfect for this gif...
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... we pulled an all-nighter playing Fifa! Lets do it over this weekend if you are free...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, i think, talking of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61728395062 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44948974278 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2365678261 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126396686985 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045063096064 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568965473592 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947340789257 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831831578103 0.0580467560999 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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