Young people say that traveling to different countries benefits them and the society.
Currently based on purpose of the Job or studies students are moving from one country to another. In my point of view definitely it will have progressive impact on each and every individual who are more frequently travelling all over the world.
Taking education certificates from other countries university will definitely give high priority in terms of job. As one of my friends who is working as HR in Technique company, he mentioned that while short listing the resume for any job openings in their company overseas studies will play major role. They have experience in different languages, how to survive with unknown people, how to work or study without family around them. They will know about the different cultures and meet with different people. They will understand how to earn money and save it for them or for their family.
I personally observe and strongly believe that the skills they obtain are entirely vary from a person who studied in local university. According to me, although he is the topper in the local university but he misses the skills such as Communication, Problem solving, risk and mitigation plans many more. I want to suggest if anyone have a chance to go to abroad for any reason better go and research.
To sum up all together I can say it totally depend on the person to person and also financial status as well. By having the overseas experience will be helpful for their carrier, family growth as well better society.
- Some shops are open 24 hours a day and 7 days a week Do you think it is a good thing for the customers shop staff and company as a whole 61
- In the recent years more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books Do the advantages of e books outweigh their disadvantages 56
- It is difficult for people in cities to do physical exercise Why is this the case How can we solve this problem 73
- There have been some problems with the bus service especially its reliability in your area over the last two weeks Write a letter to the manager of the bus company In your letter describe what the problems are explain how these problems are affecting you 73
- Today most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they were younger Is it a positive or negative development in your own opinion To what extent do you support this development 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...aking education certificates from other countries university will definitely give high pr...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ultures and meet with different people. They will understand how to earn money and s...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...person who studied in local university. According to me, although he is the topper in the local...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... many more. I want to suggest if anyone have a chance to go to abroad for any reason...
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Line 8, column 45, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...um up all together I can say it totally depend on the person to person and also financ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59039456454 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0576096467 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.666666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948063985795 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356248908181 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352231707808 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496900135649 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377430236974 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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