These days human life span is increased and they can live long years after retirement. Due to this, they are facing a lot of problems in old age. This essay further explains these issues and solutions to address the concerns.
One of the major issues facing the old generation is survival. After they retire they don’t have money and need to depend on their kids. I saw in the daily news that some people throw their parents on the road, and some parents are staying in neither old-age homes nor with their kids. For example, In India, mostly the beggars are retired people. The second problem is bored, they always sit at home and not doing anything. Some old age people are getting health problems as they stay alone and nothing to do.
There are some solutions to the above problems. Firstly, when they are at a young age need to plan retirement returns. Which can help them to live independently. Secondly, they can start a small business or help their kids by doing possible works example like buying vegetables, groceries, paying the electricity bill, or water bill, and so on. Last year when I went to Singapore all car drivers are above the age of 60. To summarize they want to earn money and want to lead their life till they are healthy.
In addition , The government can provide some policies which can give a small percentage of financial help for old age people for their survival. Also, Provide new opportunities based on their qualifications.
To sum up altogether, Old is gold. Thus, I request individual need to understand their parent's or grandparent's troubles. Help them accordingly for the better society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79787234043 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52664261141 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6886903555 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.65 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192670394259 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593899359582 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579699015142 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107135561329 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817458618137 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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