You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Hi,
I am searching for electrical iron, which was made by Philips and having the steam ironing facility. Further, it should have the capability of adjustable heating level options mainly for day to day wearing cloths. Furthermore, could you please let me know the availability of the exact matching item and the possibility of ordering the same.
In addition, I would like to know the unit price of the items with any seasonal offers available at present. I have leading bank credit card and can be use any for on requirement. It is highly appreciate if you can update the possibility of reserve the item for me until I can settle the business in coming few week. Further, please revert on possible reservation time too to act on promptly as o don’t want miss the opportunity of having the item I am waiting for your kind responses on my request and looking for the positive reply.
Thanks,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...se any for on requirement. It is highly appreciate if you can update the possibility of re...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun week seems to be countable; consider using: 'few weeks'.
Suggestion: few weeks
...til I can settle the business in coming few week. Further, please revert on possible res...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73885350318 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6904325902 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668789808917 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8342796158 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891107000745 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438948027532 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208925826395 0.0603063233224 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703196687797 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00937656160211 0.0580467560999 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.