Dear Marie,
I hope this letter finds you in the best condition of feeling.
Believe me I am really glad that you have chosen camping holiday. I do think as you are a real fond of nature and natural views this would be a breathtaking holiday for you. Since, you got familiar about this kind of trip through social media`s ads I will not go for further explanation. Just bear it in your mind which kind of places you are going to choose for the purpose of camping. To dig more, camping sites is vary from dry lands to tropical lands such as jungle or forest. To me each of them has its own merits and downsides. Just be certain you are going to visit exquisite places and experience unforgettable moments. This kind of trip really fits your personality according to the fact that you are an adventurous person always open to novel experiences.
Put aside all outstanding features you are definitely going to observe closely, I desire to warn you against some general drawbacks of this type of short journey you may confront through your camp site. First and foremost, you are normally going to sleep in a big tent with a group of people around you and this is not really considered as a safe activity because of the possibility of the presence of wild animals particularly if you select jungle or forest campsites sometimes these animals can harm you if you do not have expertise to deal with them. Following what I have said, I am also sure that your camp mentor can manage all these unpredictable events. Secondly and importantly, do not expect adequate or second to none facilities. To be exact, you may need to take a shower with the minimum amenity as you could imagine. Therefore, you cannot be that much neat and tidy to the extent that you wish. The last point I want you to be aware of is the limited hours of sleeping you are going to face.in a campsite trip you do not have the chance of getting enough sleep and it may affect your health condition or it can be put you in a boring phase so please be prepared for above mentioned potential shortcomings.
My friend Marie, if you remember our recent letters, I have told you I am completing my thesis for gaining my PhD degree thus I am snowed under with various tasks to perform. Unfortunately, because of a given reason my bad luck that I can not enjoy your company for coming holiday.
Wish you a super marvelous holiday
Take extra care,
Hiva
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...super marvelous holiday Take extra care Hiva
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 32.9175257732 219% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 26.3917525773 197% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 937.175257732 208% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 438.0 206.0 213% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45890410959 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 3.78020617076 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44771965276 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 127.690721649 185% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538812785388 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 290.88556701 218% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 438.0 16.3608247423 2677% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1953.0 76.5299724578 2552% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 438.0 16.8248392259 2603% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 85.0 4.34317383033 1957% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288888657289 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.288888657289 0.0766984524023 377% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157012769688 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581063058735 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 218.6 8.37731958763 2609% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -356.17 70.7449484536 -503% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 171.8 7.45979381443 2303% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.07 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 28.35 7.59969072165 373% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 83.0 41.2886597938 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 177.2 8.54432989691 2074% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 219.0 8.15463917526 2686% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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