it is thought by some that clothes allow you to make statements without having to say anything. Actually, people believe clothes are the best representation of what a person feels and thinks. I completely support this assertion based on potent facts and valid instances which will be all discussed further in this essay.
to embark upon, clothes can talk with people who are observing you. in other words, clothes can deliver and decode many messages to the people you work or talk with. let me encapsulate the latter viewpoint by illustrating an example from a fashion magazine. two years ago, Rhonda Byrne, a 32-year-old psychologist has surveyed the relationship between the kinds of clothes and the personality type of people who wear these clothes, this article was published in a Canadian fashion magazine and has drawn high attention to this topic. Ms Byrne has claimed people who always into designer clothes or anything with the label that attracts attention are individuals who lack self-confidence. to put it clearly, they want to attract others' attention by wearing striking clothes. on the other hand, a certain section of society who loathe wearing outlandish outfits as they do not want to stand out in public is more confident, reliable and loyal people.
having all said, to put a light on culture, I hold this view that it is an irrefutable fact that people usually bring their cultural beliefs by the way they dress. let me clear up things by denoting some true instances. American usually go for casual dress and they often dress down as they believe comfort comes first, nonetheless Japanese people keep up with the latest fashion and to them, fashion is a big deal and they dress up most of the time. To take a look at another example I would put a light on my country's people who are Muslim and Iranian women usually wear loose, long clothes and cover their hair. Consequently, everywhere in the world, you can recognize Muslims without a word of talk but just by taking a look at their appearances.
By way of conclusion, I support the presented viewpoint as I suppose clothing can express people's individuality, character and customs.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, look, nonetheless, so, i suppose, by the way, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93169398907 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71045550096 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1010275192 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201547376788 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696117635207 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478160541652 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12239639826 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016910285032 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is thought by some that clothes allow y...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...all discussed further in this essay. to embark upon, clothes can talk with peop...
^^
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...talk with people who are observing you. in other words, clothes can deliver and de...
^^
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...es to the people you work or talk with. let me encapsulate the latter viewpoint by ...
^^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Two
...ing an example from a fashion magazine. two years ago, Rhonda Byrne, a 32-year-old ...
^^^
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a Canadian fashion" with adverb for "Canadian"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ese clothes, this article was published in a Canadian fashion magazine and has drawn high attention t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...e individuals who lack self-confidence. to put it clearly, they want to attract ot...
^^
Line 3, column 775, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... attention by wearing striking clothes. on the other hand, a certain section of so...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...onfident, reliable and loyal people. having all said, to put a light on culture, I ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...cultural beliefs by the way they dress. let me clear up things by denoting some tru...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, first, look, nonetheless, so, i suppose, by the way, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93169398907 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71045550096 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1010275192 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201547376788 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696117635207 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478160541652 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12239639826 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016910285032 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.