Dear sir or madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing with regard to your recent article in Travel with me magazine under the name of wonderful attractions in Dehli. I am afraid to inform you some unintentional errors have been occurred about one of my hometown tourist attractions.
Firstly, I appreciate that you attract people's attention to my hometown tourists attractions in your internationally well-known magazine and it can bring India's tourist industry some beneficial features. Focusing on wrong information, In the third paragraph of your article, you offer some explanations about Nirvana gate and you have mentioned it is located in the southwest of India whereas the correct location is in the northwest of this nation. Another thing that must be corrected in paragraph 3 is the best time to visit this natural phenomenon that you have mentioned is in the summer while the suitable time for visiting this breathtaking feature is in fall or winter.
These errors can bring tourists confusion. In other words, they may visit the incorrect location or they may come to our hometown in a season that is not entirely proper for visitors. I do think these errors can sometimes hurt the tourist industry as they can swallow tourist's interest.
I think you can take some measure to tackle this issue in future. First and doable, you can send one of your editors to the places you want to publish an article about and talk with local people to earn correct information. Second and vital, you can also be in contact with tour guides from different countries and gain some useful as well as practical tips from them. I would be grateful if you can make this wrong information correct and provide them in your portal as it not feasible for your team to re-publish the article.
In case you seek help for correcting the wrong info you can also reach me via e-mail at hivafara77@gmail.com.
Thanks for your time and consideration.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... take some measure to tackle this issue in future. First and doable, you can send one of ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...or your team to re-publish the article. In case you seek help for correcting the...
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...Thanks for your time and consideration. Respectfully yours, Hiva Farahani ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... Respectfully yours, Hiva Farahani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, third, well, whereas, while, another thing, as to, i think, as well as, i am afraid, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 937.175257732 178% => OK
No of words: 336.0 206.0 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82117740493 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 290.88556701 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9764360917 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 4.34317383033 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254913460768 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790141870787 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621575239508 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106832186694 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908805434467 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 41.2886597938 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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