Dear Rahul,
I am writing to congratulate you on your performance at the centre stage emporium yesterday. It was simply electrifying. I am sure everyone in the audience felt the same. It was like a dream come true for me as I had always dreamt of seeing your performance live. To be honest, I couldn’t take my eyes off you even for a second. The synchronisation of your moves left me in complete awe.
As I have always been a huge fan of you, I started playing electric guitar and drums at a very tender age. Now, I have become proficient at playing both the instruments and recently joined a local musical band which primarily focuses on playing rock music. By the way, would it be possible for you to be a mentor for me? I know you are busy, but if this is possible it will be a great help for me. I believe your guidance will certainly help me to gain confidence and better/improve my current skills.
Thank you so much.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Sincerely
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests and whether they are married or single Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful others disagree Discuss both views and yo 78
- You recently organised an all day meeting for your company which took place in a local hotel In their feedback participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch Write a letter to the 78
- You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child Write a letter to the parents In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would 81
- In the future more people will choose to go on a holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday Do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73488551231 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6827112108 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6153846154 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239731672868 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888961580104 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055187040176 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162034694118 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160815462507 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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