You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:
• Say how you feel about his performance
• Give details of your musical activities
• Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot. I recently attended your concert held in Amritsar. I wanted to let you know that it was amazing to listen to you at the live concert. To commence with, the atmosphere prevailing over there was flawless. Everyone became very excited when you came to the stage to perform. I have some knowledge of music and without any doubt, I can say you have not missed any single, even though you were singing and dancing. I always make it sure to attend every concert organized in Amritsar.
Furthermore, I want to tell that I am a guitar player and use to perform in a local band. My friends and family always encouraged me to perform in a big concert or link with the music composer. If you can give me a tip to improve my skills and contact a composer or if possible give me a chance to perform in the concert as it will become a big opportunity for me.
I hope you will give tips to improve my skills and I look forward to your next concert.
Yours Truly,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...t to tell that I am a guitar player and use to perform in a local band. My friends ...
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Line 10, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your next concert. Yours Truly, Jot
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33689839572 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4063933451 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593582887701 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8646138691 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5833333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306151502007 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105259125032 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786228947978 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203111527169 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701768121061 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.