Dear Mr. Martin,
Congratuations to your success in the Super Bowl concert! I am writing this letter to express my happiness and gratitute regarding to your song "Viva La Vida" last night. Besides, I will be really appreciated if you can give me some advice on my new song.
Both my wife and I were so exctited last night. We flew directly from Beijing to D.C. two days ago, only for your performance in the concert. As my concern, when you sing this main song of your band, the concert went to the cilmax yeasterday.As thousands of people in the stadium sang with you together. I think all of us had aonther impressive night with your appearance.
I also have a small band in China named "Dizzy". Your music have been always encouraging us to make strides in rock and roll music. I wrote a song last month, I kindly propose that would you like to show me some revision idea ? I attached the demo below, please feel free to listen it at your convenience.
Thank you for your help in advance. I am promptly looking forward your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...e concert went to the cilmax yeasterday.As thousands of people in the stadium sang...
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Line 6, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e concert went to the cilmax yeasterday.As thousands of people in the stadium sang...
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Line 8, column 71, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'have' and 'been'.
Suggestion: have always been
...ina named 'Dizzy'. Your music have been always encouraging us to make strides in rock ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, really, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.703125 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75199292504 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703125 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0146673843 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4615384615 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258572374581 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866793266392 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625983964502 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160322207315 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166219022612 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.