Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concern regarding the garbage collection issue. Bescaue most of the local residents' normal life were badly influenced by the fact that the garbage could not be collected in time.
Previously, our nice and clean community was like a garden, the workers collecting rubbish could drive the truck and dump the trash bins in front of every houses along the road every day. However, as the outbreak of the strike last month, they would not come in time, ususally it would take 3 or 4 days for their appearance.
As a result, all of my neighbors compalin about this issue which brought in many inconveniences. First, every family's out door trash bin was always full, children can not walk along the street due to the stingy smell which they can not bear of. Besides, some of them suffered from allergies diagonsed by doctor, which casued by the local polluted air from these rubbish.
As we know the strike is till on going, I kindly suggest that our local concil could discuss this issue with the worker union since our community takes the highest estate tax in our city, which the workers serve for, our daily life should not be affected by this strike.
Thank you for considering my opinion about this issue, I look forward your reply soon.
Sincerely,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...bbish. As we know the strike is till on going, I kindly suggest that our local concil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, regarding, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76855895197 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29271365778 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676855895197 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5852970426 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166234189149 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593046414559 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458906629395 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094317019917 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439655698343 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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