Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to tell you that I am planing to resign my current work and try to explore the field of supply chain in my hometown.
I was graduated with supply chain degree, since I have been interested in this area since there is a mature logistic enterprise in my hometown. Addtionaly, the family is aonther major conern of mine ,since my parents are getting old. I need to take more time to take care of them.
Besides, I should thank all of my colleagues as well as you for the help in the last three years. I was a beggner of data analytic when I stepped to our company firstly, now I am advanced in this area by your instructions.With sort of sorrow, it is hard for me to say good bye to you, hope you all can go to my city for trip where I will wait for.
It will be greatly appreaciated if you can write a reference letter for me to apply for jobs in this new area.
Thank you in advance and I am waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Tony.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e family is aonther major conern of mine ,since my parents are getting old. I need...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...anced in this area by your instructions.With sort of sorrow, it is hard for me to sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, so, well, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16315789474 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45604573753 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3464772602 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246964386803 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10903948179 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813024722586 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146950935945 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732033886289 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.