Dear John,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. It is great to know that you are intending to go for a camping holiday in the coming summer and also thank you for taking me into confidence for some advice. I think you should take the opportunity and make it this summer. As you never had a chance before camping and it would be very thrilling to spend these holidays by camping.
I think that you should go for a camping holiday because from my past camping experience, I can say that you will quite enjoy it. After all, this camping holiday will offer you the opportunity to take a long walk in the wilderness and observe nature in its true habitat. You can also go to a nearby lake for fishing or swimming which you have always wanted to do. But, the best thing about this camping holiday will be that it would actually improve your mood and rejuvenate you like nothing else. On my last trip, I truly enjoyed the group singing around the campfire; it was a wonderful experience.
Having said that, however, there are some disadvantages/issues that you must keep in mind. Firstly, you have to share the bathroom with others, which can be a bit problematic for you. Secondly, dealing with bugs would be a big concern. Finally, there are only a few shops around with limited accessories and that you won't have access to any source of power, so make sure you've charged your electronic devices before you leave town
Anyway, I also would have loved to go camping with you this summer, but since my cousin is visiting me from abroad this summer, I will have to give up on that idea. . I look forward to hearing about your holiday when you get back.
Take care and stay fine.
Warm wishes,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, finally, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, after all, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 314.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53503184713 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36746656981 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6246686371 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9333333333 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307633821075 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989825220034 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727190271082 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163125994314 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980026829235 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.