Dear Marie,
Hope my letter finds you well.
First, I believe that it is fantastic that you are interested in camping! It is an amazing activity, and a chance to connect with mother nature. Our lives are centred, all around the city so much, that we actually forgot what a breathe of clean fresh air felt like. Therefore, it is a must to go on a camping trip or any other activity outdoors in nature.
Second, concerning the advice, well you need to make a to do list of all the things you will need so that you won't forget to get anything. It would be more amusing to have friends with you so you can share stories around the fire and work together as a group. Be sure to pick a safe area to camp, an area where no bears or wolfs are known to be around. Finally, have fun, do not stress about everything, the fire may not start from the first try, setting up the tent is difficult; it is okay just embrace the experience.
A camping trip would make you feel refreshed and energised. You will feel that energy once you are back at the office. Such activity would make you more connected to planet Earth and see how beautiful our environment really is. But, be sure to have bug spray with you since bugs will be lurking all around. Keep an eye to the bushes around as some might carry poisonous berries and herbs.
Don not hesitate to contact me for more details
Best regards,
ZH
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y so much, that we actually forgot what a breathe of clean fresh air felt like. Therefore...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...fresh air felt like. Therefore, it is a must to go on a camping trip or any other activ...
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Line 11, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erries and herbs. Don not hesitate to contact me for more details Best rega...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36398467433 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21693120942 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9702497467 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3571428571 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119224087562 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441659875209 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289746108664 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695083989734 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118807681672 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.