The graph indicates the average carbon dioxide per person of four countries(United Kingdom, Sweden, Itlay, and Portugal) during the 40 years from 1967.
Overall, United Kingdom shows a edge down trend, which was 10.7 in 1967 and reamined stable in the next 10 years, then edged down stably to 9 in 2007. Italy and Pottugal have similar teends -- both boost from 1967(4 for Italy and 1.75 for Porgutal)to 1997 (Italy reached 7.75 and Porgutal was ranked behind by 2 points), both of them level off in the next decades. Sweden surged up from 1967 to 1977, which only 0.25 points behind Unitde Kingdom, from then on, the figure droped rapidly, in the year of 2007, they had the same level with Porgutal.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Daniel2016
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Kingdom' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kingdoms'.
Suggestion: Kingdoms
...xide per person of four countriesUnited Kingdom, Sweden, Itlay, and Portugal during the...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... 1967. Overall, United Kingdom shows a edge down trend, which was 10.7 in 1967...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 575.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 122.0 206.0 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7131147541 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14184056287 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729508196721 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 157.5 290.88556701 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.9048188108 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 143.75 76.5299724578 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176432972813 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109606977877 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847101023789 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175907946726 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079057237005 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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