The graphs illustrate weather conditions in Brasilia and Recife.In Brasilia, rainy season starts in November and lasts until January, when at least 21 days a month are wet. In Recife, it lasts for five months lasting from April until August, with a minimu

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The graphs illustrate weather conditions in Brasilia and Recife.
In Brasilia, rainy season starts in November and lasts until January, when at least 21 days a month are wet. In Recife, it lasts for five months lasting from April until August, with a minimum of 21 rainy days as well. The temperature in two cities is also different. In Brasilia, for instance the average annual temperature is between 20-25 degrees Celsius, with daily high at 37 degrees in August and daily low at almost 0 degrees in June. Climate in Recife can be considered as more tropical than of the other city with average annual temperature between 25-30 degrees and daily high and low at 40 and at 15 degrees in February and June respectively.
Moreover, Brasilia is a more thunderous place, as the number of days with thunder from October till March fluctuates between12 and 16, while in Recife the maximum number of days with thunder is 3. Furthermore, Brasilia is a sunnier place, where it shines at least 4 hours a day, while in Recife sunshine can be seen for 3 hours in August.

The graphs illustrate weather conditions in Brasilia and Recife.

In Brasilia, rainy season starts in November and lasts until January, when at least 21 days a month are wet. In Recife, it lasts for five months lasting from April until August, with a minimum of 21 rainy days as well. The temperature in two cities is also different. In Brasilia, for instance the average annual temperature is between 20-25 degrees Celsius, with daily high at 37 degrees in August and daily low at almost 0 degrees in June. Climate in Recife can be considered as more tropical than of the other city with average annual temperature between 25-30 degrees and daily high and low at 40 and at 15 degrees in February and June respectively.

Moreover, Brasilia is a more thunderous place, as the number of days with thunder from October till March fluctuates between12 and 16, while in Recife the maximum number of days with thunder is 3. Furthermore, Brasilia is a sunnier place, where it shines at least 4 hours a day, while in Recife sunshine can be seen for 3 hours in August.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7311827957 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57146665244 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7668136081 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469407882891 0.216113520407 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243397076921 0.0766984524023 317% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.236457586866 0.0603063233224 392% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305377364355 0.12726935374 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116575081812 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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