Dear John,
I hope you are very well!
I won the Nation writing prize! You do not know how joyful I am but I want to say with you help I am able to achieve this unbelievable target. Many thanks!
The other thing I am so glad is the prize offer me a vacation which is 5 days Singapore tour, which I would like to invite you come with me together, not only because you help me a lot but also you are my best and lifetime friend.
The tour include returen flight tickets, accomodations and local guide tour service, which we pack our belongings and some clothes is enough. We can go to the night zoo, famous port and enjoy local delicious food. I am so excited.
I hope the vacation can be thank you gift and the joy moment I like share it with you.
Hope you have chance come it with me.
Kind regards,
Joe
- Successful companies use advertisement to make more sales.What can make an advertisement very effective?Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society? 61
- Someone believes school should put students of different ages into the same class What is your opinion 73
- You recently ordered an item that was advertised as having a discount from the normal price but you have found that when you paid you did not get the discount Write to the company In your letterExplain that you did not get the discountTell them where 73
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic In Britain when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them Sometimes the government has to pay for this ca 84
- You borrowed something from your friend later it got damaged Write letter to your friend In your letter you should apology about the issue tell how it got damaged say you are going to fix this issue 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 670.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24050632911 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18972707494 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2687677174 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225211168231 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901059101964 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773489765928 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127191739731 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563855354673 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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