IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: "Trebuchet MS", sans-serif; background: rgb(225, 235, 242);">To Manager of
Restaurant X,</span><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 115%; font-family: "Trebuchet MS", sans-serif;"><br>
<br>
<span style="background:#E1EBF2">I am writing this letter to complain about poor quality of
service that I observed during my last visit to the restaurant. I am convinced
that it is unacceptable service for this highly ranked place according to
reviews in different sources. Although, it is quite unpleasant situation, I
believe that it can be resolved if responsible actions will be taken on your
end.</span><br>
<br>
<span style="background:#E1EBF2">Last Friday I had special occasion in my family, it was 5th
anniversary of our marriage with my wife. The special event for the night was
dinning at the X restaurant. Therefore, I reserved a table for two person at 7
o'clock at the restaurant located at 100 King St West. We came at the place in
time and were seated in the cozy spot near the window with the view on the
street. Next, we ordered 2 beef steakes, caesar and greek salads and home-made
fries with bacon as an appetizer. Until the moment everything went great and we
were happy with the choice of the dinning place, however, following sequence of
the events left us disappointed and regretted about this decision.</span><br>
<br>
<span style="background:#E1EBF2">After approximately an hour of waiting, we received our
appetizer. The waitress did not apologize for the long time waiting and moved
on to take an order at the next table. It past 30 minutes more after we
finished the appetizer to get our steakes, however, what is more important,
that our stakes were undercooked. Although, we asked to make them well-done,
they brought us it in rare condition. Me and my wife hate to eat undercooked
meat covered with blood, so it was unfortunate to see it when we were starved
by waiting so long. I asked to change our meat, but to my surprise waitress
refused to do so motivated that it is exactly the order we made. I requested to
talk to the manager, and again was told that it is not possible, because he is
not present at this time.</span><br>
<br>
<span style="background:#E1EBF2">Our dinner were ruined and the mood of special occasion
vanished. We left the restaurant extremely dissatisfied and angry. I demand a
compensation of the full cost of our dinner plus your apologize in regards to
this unacceptable situation.</span><br>
<br>
<span style="background:#E1EBF2">Looking forward to your reply,</span><br>
<span style="background:#E1EBF2">Mr. and Mrs. Smith.<o:p></o:p></span></span></p>
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-15 | elham mousavi | 78 | view |
| 2023-07-04 | elham mousavi | 81 | view |
| 2021-06-11 | Julie Nguyễn | 82 | view |
| 2019-12-20 | abedjar2 | 11 | view |
| 2019-12-18 | Anirudhakarsh | 11 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ... 242;'>To Manager of Restaurant X, ^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Service
...ter to complain about poor quality of service that I observed during my last visit to...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reviews
...this highly ranked place according to reviews in different sources. Although, it is q...
^^^^^^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anniversary
...ial occasion in my family, it was 5th anniversary of our marriage with my wife. The speci...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dinning
.... The special event for the night was dinning at the X restaurant. Therefore, I reser...
^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 68, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
.... Therefore, I reserved a table for two person at 7 oclock at the restaurant located...
^^^^^^
Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Oclock
... reserved a table for two person at 7 oclock at the restaurant located at 100 King S...
^^^^^^
Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... reserved a table for two person at 7 oclock at the restaurant located at 100 King S...
^^^^^^
Line 35, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Street
... near the window with the view on the street. Next, we ordered 2 beef steakes, caesa...
^^^^^^
Line 37, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Fries
...caesar and greek salads and home-made fries with bacon as an appetizer. Until the m...
^^^^^
Line 47, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Appetizer
...y an hour of waiting, we received our appetizer. The waitress did not apologize for the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 49, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...e for the long time waiting and moved on to take an order at the next table. It ...
^^
Line 59, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...tunate to see it when we were starved by waiting so long. I asked to change our ...
^^
Line 61, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Refused
...our meat, but to my surprise waitress refused to do so motivated that it is exactly t...
^^^^^^^
Line 71, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Vanished
...ined and the mood of special occasion vanished. We left the restaurant extremely dissa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 73, column 65, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... cost of our dinner plus your apologize in regards to this unacceptable situation.
Line 79, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...EBF2'>Looking forward to your reply,
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 32.9175257732 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 26.3917525773 208% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2516.0 937.175257732 268% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 415.0 206.0 201% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06265060241 4.54256449028 133% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 3.78020617076 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.87529771501 2.54303337028 231% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 235.0 127.690721649 184% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 290.88556701 232% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.13402061856 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.091000398 44.8134815571 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.25 76.5299724578 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 25.9375 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.29896907216 768% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00466409085219 0.216113520407 2% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.000834520622764 0.0766984524023 1% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00323208447403 0.0603063233224 5% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00142194002553 0.12726935374 1% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00804370747594 0.0580467560999 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 8.37731958763 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.16 8.71597938144 208% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 41.2886597938 240% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 8.62886597938 243% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 8.15463917526 258% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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