A job application Cover letter
You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are:
1. Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired
2. Your energy and enthusiasm for the job
3. Your past experience in a similar position.
Dear HR Manager,
I am writing to express my interest in the possin of International Business Manager that was advertised in the Times newspaper on 06/04/2020
My education consists of Bachelor’s Degree with first class honours in Business organization from the University of Gujarat, as well as Master’s Degree in applied International Business from the University of Pune, where I assisted my Professor in the new intentional business development program that provides me the immense knowledge of Business strategies and their growth.
Further to this, I have since worked for Vadilal Industries as Senior Manager for over seven years. My extensive International experience and market penetration strategies, together with my penchant for detail, have all served to help make me highly effective at what I do. I have a proven track record of producing sustainable increases in operational support initiatives, business growth, and revenue, which makes me a suitable candidate for a leadership position at your esteemed company.
Finally, I have driving this passion in me to part of International business industry since I was in my bachelor, and so my enthusiasm for the industry is considerable.
Please find my CV attached for your perusal, and I look forward to discussing this opportunity further at interview.
Yours faithfully
Daxesh Barot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...usiness strategies and their growth. Further to this, I have since worked for Vadila...
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Line 8, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...was in my bachelor, and so my enthusiasm for the industry is considerable. Ple...
^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...view. Yours faithfully Daxesh Barot .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55238095238 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21751037876 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.910271141 44.8134815571 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.571428571 76.5299724578 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.0 16.8248392259 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112196383569 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684240633499 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444702454775 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069892796365 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530452468651 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 8.37731958763 235% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 70.7449484536 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 8.71597938144 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 7.59969072165 138% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 8.62886597938 353% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.