laptop is not working , write a letter to laptop shop .
Respected Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I am experiencing a problem with a laptop I purchased from your shop.
The laptop is of xyz brand and it become very slow and even hang's a lot.
As it's end of financial year I have to complete a lot of audit work.
I work from home and hence can't access any other devices for work. slowness of laptop is giving a lot of trouble and sometimes I have to start with work anew.
Can I send my sister with laptop to your shop as I am overwhelmed with my work and can't come personally.
Please ask your technician department to fix the problem to the earliest.
Thanks for your time and consideration.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...hop. The laptop is of xyz brand and it become very slow and even hangs a lot. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come very slow and even hangs a lot. As its end of financial year I have to c...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...come very slow and even hangs a lot. As its end of financial year I have to com...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun audit seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of audits'.
Suggestion: a lot of audits
...nd of financial year I have to complete a lot of audit work. I work from home and hence cant ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...audit work. I work from home and hence cant access any other devices for work. slow...
^^^^
Line 6, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Slowness
...cant access any other devices for work. slowness of laptop is giving a lot of trouble an...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 84, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...op as I am overwhelmed with my work and cant come personally. Please ask your techn...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 591.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 132.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47727272727 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5698126582 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 176.4 290.88556701 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8792312917 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293794231005 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958846591443 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908419570992 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110492315055 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100463705006 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.