Dear Nately,
Hope this letter of mine find you and your family in ravishing health. I am writing to show my gratitude and I have recently received our pictures that you sent.
Pictures are really great and most of them mesmerized me, as I walked through the memory lane when I was in Italy with you. I enjoyed thoroughly while staying in your apartment and cannot forget those long night chats. We have been through every possible place of tourist attraction there, but the best part was the company of you and Tony. Apart from that, I am writing this letter late because I was busy in my admission process just after my arrival in India, I got no time to write any note for you.
How about this time you and Tony visit India, there is a plethora of places and verity of attractions. Before joining the classes I have three months of time, please come up with some plan and I would love to be your host. Looking for your reply and thanks again for unforgettable moments and capture.
Your Lovingly,
ABC
- You recently read an article in a newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to inform him about it. Use the following points.1. What is the article about?2. What is the error?3. What you expect the ed 87
- Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents, and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem. 89
- Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Your brother couldn't join you on a trip that you guys planned. Write a letter to your friend inviting him to join.- explain about the trip.- explain why your brother couldn't make it.- giving details about the trip. 73
- Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, really, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54347826087 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25689449883 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4293663505 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311770462457 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114667621347 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349117948234 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207897036916 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187388403225 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.