Dear my beloved friends,
I am just writing to express my appreciation to all of you for a wonderful holiday in Bali, Indonesia two weeks ago.
Time flies so fast and it has been a ride since we came back home after seven-day trip to Bali - a beautiful island in Indonesia. We have had a nice trip with lots of fun and interesting experience which helped us explore many new places and create unforgettable memories. I have just received all the photos that you sent them through Flickr, whose quality is good to keep track our journey. Thank you all of you for making my occasion special than ever.
I planned to write this letter right after arriving at home, but my hectic schedule during business trip did not allow me to do that. I believe that nothing is too late to start and this is the reason I have to send the email to you to show my feeling about our holiday.
Why don't we gather and join a small party at my house next week? My parents will not stay at home at the weekend so that we can use the space to have some fun. Make sure you keep the first weekend in August free so we can celebrate together.
Keep in touch.
Shu
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30414746544 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24697610303 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3126213241 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249133922782 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890209675922 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801009859292 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133744403468 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618496873435 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.