Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:•thank them for the photos and for the holiday•explain why you didn't write ea

Dear Jay,

I am writing this letter to thank you for the awesome reception and hospitality at your house last month during my holidays. I really appreciate your time and patient to keep up with my tight schedule and show me around.

I have received the photos that you managed to capture those precious moments I had during my visit. Moreover, I am so overwhelmed and touched after receiving the photos that I frames most of them and keep in drawing room to relish every time. These are one of my best memories now. I was about to write you last week but, but not able to take out some time after finishing piled up works in my absence.

There is a long holiday after 2 months during the winter. Why don't you come and stay will me this time? I could make some plan to go for a road trip. Please let me know your opinions.

Your friend,
Chiranjit

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ight schedule and show me around. I have received the photos that you manag...
^
Line 6, column 178, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'frame'
Suggestion: frame
...uched after receiving the photos that I frames most of them and keep in drawing room t...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y after 2 months during the winter. Why dont you come and stay will me this time? I ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21497037226 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9251596093 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324149315689 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106678996633 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625029936961 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207157520922 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365906384203 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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