Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
Explain why you didn’t write earlier
Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Jack and Sarah,
I hope this letter find you in the radiant of health and the best of spirit. I am writing this letter to thank you for your nice hospitality. You make a remarkable journey for the last of my life.
I would like to say that I am immensely grateful from both of you for organizing such a wonderful trip and allowing me to stay at your home and the last which is sending those worthy photographs. Besides, I would dare to say that I was overwhelmed with emotions when I received those memorialist photos. I put them on my album so I could see them as often as I can.
I am so sorry for my delaying time to write this letter. Recently, the new product of my company was release and we had been facing with a hug demand so we schemed to rise the volume of production. As a result, I had been becoming so catch up with my overload works. It’s about two months that I had worked from dawn to dusk even at weekends. Fortunately, I pay the next month off to be away from work and stressful condition of workplace
The next weekend is my son’s birthday and I have promised him to celebrate it for him with amazing entertainment. You are more than welcome to come Iran. I expect you in this occasion. Beside I will take you to some of the famous places in Iran such as Pasargad, Takht-E- Jamshid and so on. In addition, there are a lot of picturesque landscapes special in north of Iran. I am sure you will enjoy your time here.
I am forwarding to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Sahar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...is occasion. Beside I will take you to some of the famous places in Iran such as Pasargad,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27083333333 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52944656454 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 127.690721649 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0300542303 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302582047633 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096803738445 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836774172126 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145030075018 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107197350862 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.