Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends they have just sent you some photos of your holidays Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn t write earlier

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...ood condition. How about your family? I hopefully your family in well condition too. I am writ...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hat photos send to me are very amazing. I hope can visit your home again in next ...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...can visit your home again in next year. I really happy when get holiday in your K...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun vacation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many vacations'.
Suggestion: many vacations
...n your Korean country because there are many vacation such as beach and bar that interesting ...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...esia to vacation when you have holiday. I recommended to you which choose vacatio...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ery interesting especially Kecak dance. I will give you good service in Bali beca...
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Message: Are you missing a verb?
...r attention and see you next time. I hopefully you can reply my letter as soon as possible...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41899441341 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33278858072 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513966480447 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9498977253 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.7333333333 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9333333333 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352481331658 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126236361897 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735466198469 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23939782333 0.12726935374 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711201787388 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.3 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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